by EroticApe
You write about a woman as if she's a piece of meat. Disgusting. I've given you one star, only because it's not possible to give zero.
Nice job! I hope you do a couple more sequels as she gets into her
new business. Maybe you can turn her on to other things to get her
more into the fun. BTW, while I don't condone belittling anyone, whores
and escorts ARE pieces of meat as that is what they selling, their meat.
3 stars...5 if you can pick up the pace!
Rubbish. Absolute codswallop, and nasty and vicious as well. I would not want to be a woman alone in a room with you.
A good idea with lots of potential, but the pacing was messed up and pretty much none of the potential was utilized.
I don't think women are objects or pieces of meat, whatever their profession.
I would not treat anyone the way my characters behave in this story.
This is a place for fantasies, not reality.
Anyone too immature to understand that should not be on this site, and especially not in the Non-Consent category of it.