All Comments on 'The Reluctant Psychic Ch. 11'

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Billydee2Billydee2about 16 years ago
Very Good Story

I really hope there's more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I certainly would like more

Another good selection. I do wish the women would get a little less coy. Are all of them knocked up?

Anyway, an excellent story. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Keep 'em coming!

I sure hope you'll finish this tale, however long it becomes, without any lengthy delays between the remaining installments!

This was another good chapter, if a bit short. And your hinting about pregnancy(ies?) could be subtler.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
more, please , more

please finish the whole story. (quite a few unexplained persons/side stories)

Hale1Hale1almost 10 years ago
The second time around

I started this story some time ago but quit in the middle of the first chapter because it was too simple. A psychic with a harem. This time I actually read it and am very favorably impressed. I luv your characters and your story development.

If you would like a copy editor to help you with any of your work give me a shout, I'm retired so I can get things back to you in a hurry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome

I can't believe this story hasn't more views and comments

cindyp1976cindyp1976almost 3 years ago

love the story but think it's just so wrong that they are hiding that they are pregnant from him I think he's going to be really hurt they didn't tell him

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBB7 months ago

Getting better each chapter

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