by Mistress_Christine
Thank you rml65 but give a poor overworked woman a chance lol
2 for the price of one, I really like this series and hope you will keep on this
I hope you will be writing more of this series as well as your other series. I wish i could have met a Mistress such as you when I was younger.
I'm not big into the Dome/Sub thing, but reading this story made me wet. I hope it will continue.
Kisses, Steph
I am so enjoying this - lovely to see how each character is developing
Hallo Mistress Christine!
Hmm, Maria's an interesting twist.... Both Jasmine a dominant, and Maria her submissive, and both are submissive to our Mistress,,, I can hardly wait to read chapter 4,,, yes!
5-Stars for all the orgasms, I am anticipating,,, oh yeah!
Gay Kat.
For the first two episodes you had a good thing going. You had a build up with the first maid. Adding the second maid makes absolutely no sense from a premise/expectation perspective. Worse still, Janice's personality (or is it Jasmine? who honestly knows at this point...) took a complete 180. So, the girl you set up as subby is actually dominant? So, then you need a new sub, so you introduce a second maid. Why not just keep the first girl as the sub.
God, this is beyond stupid. Way to ruin a good story idea. 1/5.