by GenesisBurke
I can't wait for next chapters. I hope we'll see a good and long training like every wife deserves and needs to be a good slut.
Great start! I can't wait for them to begin Tara's reprogramming and what it all entails. Please continue and update when you are able to.
Very interesting. Can't wait to read about her reprogramming and what she's like after.
Great story! Ends too quickly though, please make a part 2 or make it longer
Shouldn't this be in the mind control category instead of nonconsent?
This was a GREAT story but I wished I hadn't read it. I wished I hadn't read it because it was way too short. Ooh the possibilities! I really hope you expand on this and make an incredible story. And I hope that somehow I find out you have expanded this story and find my way back to it.
You have only teased us....
To a dude (i refuse to call him a man) who wants a Stepford wife without actually deserving one? He doesnt want a wife, he wants a whore who will clean up after him and cater to his every desire. And yet he has no desire to cater to her, to be her oartner, her husband.
He deserves to be castrated and pimped out to homeless men dor free gay sex.
Excellent writing. I wonder where this will lead? How dark will it become?
I don't have an issue with the non-con content. I wouldn't be here if I did. The issue I have is that if they fuck up even just once, they end up with either the cops swooping in, a murderous psycho out for their blood, or both. And people fuck up. It doesn't matter how many women they successfully "reprogram", it matters how many slip through the net and come back, pissed as hell, for revenge. For something like this to be "believable" (which matters a lot to some readers), you need a perfect system, and no system is perfect. Sure, with THIS victim, the victim falls in love (or what you want to call it) with Mikey and they make plans for the future together, yadaya, but the problem isn't with one particular victim, the problem is with the cumulative pool of ALL victims.
THANK YOU!
"Well-written porn" is practically an oxymoron. This makes me happy and also makes me touch myself. I look forward to the sequel.