All Comments on 'The Rescuer'

But short

kind of one sided at then end

The story was well enough written but given the situation---lost in a snowstorm, rescued by a stranger etc---you could have made a lot more of this story. And all the AAAAAAGGGGHHHH!s etc are unnecessary, making the text look like something from a cheap comic. There are plenty of perfectly good words in the English language that you could have used instead of these.

Now that was HOT!!!

This was a nice little story, thank you for sharing it!

This story set me in the right mood. Good story all around!

It was alright.

Like to read more.Maybe flush out story as they move forward.

Please say you're going to do part two of this story soon.