by BigMadStork
I like the single person perspective much better. Hunter seems like a perfectly likable character, Penney was my favorite female in the first series and this as well. I'm hooked on this series as I get with all of your stories.
This is turning out to be just a great as the first. Keep up the great work.
I hate to say it but sex should enhance the plot line, not be it. I know this is a erotic site, however it can detract from the story. I find myself skipping the sex scenes and I'm missing allot of information. I'm still rating a it 5 because of your imagination and your ability to express yourself. I'm not a writer but an avid reader who is envious of those with your abilities. Just my two cents.
During the previous story the sexual activity held a space within the plotline, bk2 the plotline has all but disappeared being replaced by endless, repetitive, sexual activity without rhyme or reason..