All Comments on 'The Rescuer Bk. 02 Pt. 05'

by BigMadStork

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txcrackertxcrackerover 3 years ago

One of your best series loved Dads story as well as the kids story !

Iceman79Iceman79over 3 years ago

Very good story. The one thing I would want to is switch Pam and Bonnie. I thought Bonnie would have fit better with Hunter. I really enjoyed the story though

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Great Ending

You always manage to tie everything up so well. As usual I'm not a fan of Paula being sent down to the pool to be a slut, a bit to much for me. I love how you wrote this and as always quite impressive.

Irishbear03Irishbear03over 3 years ago
Amazing Series

You’ve done it again, what a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Swing and its a homerun!! Knocked it out of the park!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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I guess it's time to start Book 3 of The Rescuer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome thank you for your wonderful series 5 stars

kingdozerkingdozer4 months ago

u killed it with bubba not able to have kids hes my fav u turned him into a cuck kinda makes me hate hunter even more tbh

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Yes, it's been a while since I published. I had a bit of a writer's funk and have survived. I just published a short story (for me), and more will follow.

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