All Comments on 'The Rescuer Bk. 03 Pt. 02'

by BigMadStork

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Mack1982Mack1982over 3 years ago

Can't wait for more!!! Love the direction and the stories themselves!!

NetWhizNetWhizover 3 years ago
Love the stories but hate this part

You could have had Debbie be severely injured or lose a limb. Killing her off was not right.

dslwagondslwagonover 3 years ago
Great Story!!!!

Please continue the series!!!! I love the story and the way you tell of the adventures and the sex. The story line stays on track and keep everyone on their toes waiting for the scene to unfold and takes more of a realistic life line. Not sure if you read these comments but hope you do, I loved the first story with Brain and now the with the next generation.

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Always Wonderful

Thanks for another good chapter. Although I didn't like Debbie getting killed, I figured it was about time someone did. My only gripe was you said grandpa Ben, wasn't it Brian?

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Yes, it's been a while since I published. I had a bit of a writer's funk and have survived. I just published a short story (for me), and more will follow.

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