All Comments on 'The Resort Pt. 01'

Well done, once again.

Love the concept but it was a massive disappointment to discover family members included in the story. So at that point I quit reading, incest is a massive turn off on a par with scat and ’watersports’. That said I’ve no idea if there’s any incest in this or future chapters, even if there isn’t then eroticism and family don’t belong in the same sentence to me.

Best of luck with your writing

Tess (uk)

I like the concept as well, but I hope the cousin gets out of the story very soon.

cant stand the prick already, and it ruins the vibe.

Overall, I liked your story, but I found the beginning very confusing. You start with Sarah reading her letter of employment, and then, suddenly, we have her, along with her family, arriving on the island. You really needed to introduce them by explaining that they were going on a week's vacation before she started her job, or something so it makes sense.