All Comments on 'The Restaurant Ch. 01'

... but, even in fun, never explain your 'jokes' or tell us when to laugh; if your writing is as good as you think it is we will 'get it'.

A decent introductory chapter from a new writer is always welcome - thank you for sharing your work with us. I look forward to reading more.

This is a good appitizer. Ready for the first course.

Thank you for writing.