All Comments on 'The Retreat Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great so far! Hope to read the next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Interesting

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Well done. These stories are usually rushed through a little to get to the part that titillates and this is a little quick too, but probably out of necessity. An interesting start and I'm lookig forward to Ch. 02. Michael - Dom Inus59

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