All Comments on 'The Reversal'

Interesting premise.

Somewhat rushed, though.

Needed some teasing. Particularly of his cock and balls. Edging. Maybe while she finger fucked herself.

His begging was false. Just words. No meaning.

Four stars.

I couldn't disagree more that it was rushed. That was the force of Clara's will, her power, setting the pace. Which was breathless. The erotic tension was in Sean's resistance, masculine pride, tho he was open to submitting. As it usually is with men, his dick betrayed him.

Where next? I know in the prolog, you teased out C's interest in swapping power, but I think there are deeper levels of submission Sean's has to endure first. And by all means, it should be done against his resistance. That's the most delicious thing about this.

You write beautiful smut, A. Keep at it!

~PM

I'd love to hear more about their relationship.

This is one of the most foolish and stupid fantasy kink stories. Since being cruel, choking & striking is so good. Why doesn't he after her turn call her a slut and choke and beat his "lover" so she can have a wonderful time? If she doesn't like it, to bad, he gets to enjoy torturing like she did in this story!!! LOL

I THINK U GET THE IDEA HOW SILLY THE STORY IS!