All Comments on 'The Ride'

Please make this a multi-chapter story! I want to see if the biker can convert her from a young, straight, college girl to a pussy and strap-on crazed lesbian!

There has to be some more to this story

why don,t you write more your stories are hot

There should be more chapters to some of your other stories.

when can we expect the next episode?

any story ideas that you take or anything like that?

What a great story! And HOT too! I love stories with dominant and strong butch women who are strap-on experts and use them vigoursly with their pretty femme girlfriends. I also love that in your stories you have the butch lift her femme while kissing and carrying to the bed. Please write more stories like this, you are very talented!

Please tell me there will be so much more to this story!!!

This is a good story but unfortunately you ruined the effect with poor spelling and grammar. For example you said "... kissing down her spin ..." you meant spine but due to a lack of re-reading your draft and basic editing it escaped notice. It is small things such as this that makes for difficult reading. Regardless I look forward to a continuation of this story

Told with lots of depth and feeling. Also with the type of empathy of and unattached middle aged dyke biker feeling lonely and needing something more stable.

Worthy of 5🌟's & 🌋

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Loved the 55 year old butch dyke seducing a 20 year old woman. Hope PJ and Yvonne have more adventures together. And other older butch dykes seducing young women, maybe using a fake cum strapon in the mix.

You tell a beautiful and erotic story! They may come from different places and times but they are perfect at meeting each other’s needs and desires! Great story, great characters and great fun!

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