All Comments on 'The Ride Home'

by orangeroses12

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AliceGeeAliceGee10 months ago

You liked the opening sentence so much that you repeated it. Despite this bit of sloppy editing you delivered a hot piece of interracial erotic which I thoroughly enjoyed. So you are forgiven the opening mistake and are awarded five stars for an enjoyable and highly arousing short story. I do hope the two protagonists meet up again.

orangeroses12orangeroses1210 months agoAuthor

I apologize for the first line error. It was a copy & paste error. I do hope everyone enjoys the story despite the error. Thank you for reading. :-)

MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 months ago

Yes, this piece was all about the torrid sex scene, which was well crafted/hot but you also gave us a glimpse of both characters — developed just enough to enhance as did the anonymity.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Deeply immersive short story, that as a man, will have you envying the sexual tension that is manifested between two beautifully intelligent women.

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