All Comments on 'The Right Kind of Girl for Him Ch. 03'

Very nice story. I hope you continue with the series.

I'm glad this is a slow burn. Can't wait for the action.

Again, loving the human side of this mutually sharing and learning dynamic. Bring on the next chapter!!

I want to thank the author for a wonderful beginning to a story where the submissive isn’t a complete tool. Feels real, in my experience, and I look forward to following their relationship as it develops.

I hope both characters continue to feel like real people with complex emotions. True D/s relationships are built on trust, consent, and mutual respect. A lot of stories either never find that, or lose it by ch 4 or 5.

Good luck. Great read.

I agree, very promising start. I like the point of view of both characters included and it feels real, with the emotional clumsiness and struggling to make the connection work. Please continue the story!

this is great, and it makes me so happy you're continuing this

looking forward to more!

Fucking awesome

SO CUTE!!!!!

This is my favorite Story on this site. You have done an excellent job.

keep it up,

This is moving along just fast enough for me to yearn for more. Great writing and imagination.

My honest feedback is....I liked it until you drifted into the imaginary scenario when she first took the strap-on from the draw. That should have been left until it was the real thing, you went into far too much detail far too early.

The basic storyline is good, very good. Don't rush it.

The imagination scene before we even knew the characters put me off it enough to spoil it for me.

Re: my last comment. Sorry, I did not read part one and two. I took this as a part one of your story. Now I see why this made no sense to me. My mistake, sorry.

This is soo good and romantic amazing

Wholesome and hot, I like it.

Could this be a sane, non abusive " femdom" relationship? So rare on Literotica. Great story so far.

Good premise.

But the sex is too early in the chapter, and it's only thought about, not real.

Four stars.