All Comments on 'The Right to Remain Silent Ch. 02'

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DCohen2349DCohen2349over 10 years ago
Oops Forgot!

Small editing issue:

"Sarah was just walking into the door to the station as Sarah came through the security door into the reception area."

Obviously ABI was walking in!

DCohen2349DCohen2349over 10 years ago
HOT! But Too Short!

I know Part 3 is sitting there waiting for me, still wish this part could have been longer!

Still 5-stars.

redsox04meredsox04meover 11 years ago
Great Cat!

Just seems to get better and better with each chapter...roll on!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
oooh nice!!!

please write more soon and longer i hope :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great chapter

please continue

elle_9549elle_9549almost 12 years ago

Love the plot and the characters. More please! ~ L

BahamaBahamaalmost 12 years ago
Awesome

This is truly awesome ! More please :)

estragonestragonalmost 12 years ago
Very Good Plot, Hot Characters

You only need an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great

Hope there is a lot more chapters in this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Awesome

' Please keep writing ! This story has everything mystery, drama, sex !

One of the best stories i have had the pleasure to read on here !

Regards Eliza .xx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

this story is so good more please

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