All Comments on 'The Ring Ch. 06: Instructions'

Excellent in every respect.

Très belle mise en situation!!! Y aurait'il une suite?

This story "The ring" (the 6 chapters) might be one of the most intriguing and captivating ('captivant' in french) story I've read.

It is one of the very few I desired to read again, and again.

It is the first for which I decide to leave a "comment".

The characters and the theme and its treatment appear to me, according to what I have read, very original.

Maybe because of the tentative of a kind of realism : how to live somewhat realistically such a fantazy, how to write with economy and an ultimate precision such an "exceptional" relationship ?

I am not a specialist in "literature", I cannot identify or name the "procédés" used - except this very effective procédé placing the "conclusion" (?) at the beginning, the rest of the story being a kind of flashback - but I consider its quality is rare, very rare : reading again and again the story unveils many new facets of the relationship.

Many things are not explicitly sayed in the skeleton of the story. They are to be reconstituted by the reader.

But most of the sentences, the dialogues, the clauses, are incredibly precise and effective.

Many Thanks or Congratulations to the author, who is clearly brilliant 'selon mon opinion', and probably discreete.

ps : I come frequently to see whether new posts of chapters are added by the author.