All Comments on 'The Ring of Truth Ch. 02'
by petskunk
- 8 Comments
Anonymousover 6 years agoWonderful - but more dialogue would be great. Love it when a mom talks dirty
Anonymousover 6 years agoI loved the original by Caesar but am excited by the chance that your MC will understand that he needs the ring.
jmkuehnover 6 years agoI am getting into this story. Though I hope there is more explanation of what this ring is and why it is making all the girls it encounters cock crazed.
EdJocastarover 6 years agoLike another person said, I think more dialogue, especially from his mother, would be good. Really enjoyed the seductive, yet familiar parental tone she gave when she talked dirty. I also like how the power of the ring makes her into some incestuous seductress. Can't wait to see what happens next, and hopefully his mother falls deeper into the ring's power!
Anonymousover 5 years agocant see the connection over six sexual experiences, or while boning his mother
Sex4lf57over 4 years agoLove the sex. The addition of the dijiin at the end was interesting. I assume that's like a genie. Can't wait to see what happens in chapter three.
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