by Dubinsky
What an excellent story! Fantastic description and dialog, and I loved the pacing and build-up to the final scene.
You succeeded in creating another amusing, highly erotic, cleverly conceived scenario. Perfectly paced; would enjoy reading more about Elle and Val - love the intensity. Keep the stories coming. 5 stars easy.
Hi, here from the ND contest. Not a usual reader of the category but this was very well presented and very hot. Great job!