All Comments on 'The Riott Squad, Kay'

by MTL17

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This was great! Sweet exchanges between Ruby and Liv. I was excited to read a Ruby Riott story, I always found her to be super attractive, so thanks for making that happen. She makes a good switch.

litcalurker1litcalurker1almost 3 years ago

Loved this (of course). I like how you wrote Ruby here- objectively, her character looks and feels like she'd be a dom, but subjectively, her character's W/L pct. prevents her from being that. Since you're you, I'm already thinking about the directions this could go if it's a series, (which I really hope it is), and whom else could be involved if it does (Sarah, Peyton, Emma).

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I am not a professional writer and welcome constructive criticism. Any stories I write that are loosely based on a celebrity or TV character comes from a place of fan worship and boredom. My stories feature themes of predominantly one woman dominating another. Strap-on anal se...