All Comments on 'The Rise of Rachel Price T-Girl Pt. 12'

Such a good storyline but I’m waiting for the dark corner to be turned, not to dark please. Waiting in anticipation for the next chapter xxx

Really nice job developing characters and setting the trap. Denver's hooked on Charlie, Charlie's getting kinkier and when Levant turns Denver into his wife, they'll all come together. From things Charlie has said, I can see HRT and surgery in Denver and Rachel's future. Maybe grandpa gets sick and medical help becomes the catalyst. Believable setup and interesting story of those with wants and money and those with needs and broke.

Thanks. I'm probably Rachel's biggest fan, so I don't think you have anything to worry about there. As promised, the final ending you won't easily dismiss, but that's a while off. Like life, there are several twists and turns to get there. I think you will really enjoy the next chapter.

Enjoying your story! Was Charlie born Charley?

Yes , there is backstory on this. She switched to Charlie when an error was made on a paper application form at University. Her friends stuck to it. Levant initially hired her assuming she was a man ( Lucy the PA deliberately did this for all senior management applications - part of her job as she saw it was to keep gold diggers away from Levant ) .

the rise of rachel price. such a great story!

Mil