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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
love it!

Please keep writing. I love your story so much I have it bookmarked on my blackberry. Only comment that I really have is to make each chapter a little longer. Thanks for writing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Keep up the excellent work

Dude you need to finish this story it is soooooo good. Your discription of the scenery is so convincing. I can not wait to read more chapters on these two characters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Enjoying this

One comment, longer chapters....oh like 6 or 7 pages (just kidding). I am really enjoying your story, look forward to reading till the finish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Thanks for the great work and please continue it

I really enjoy the Asian feel to your story. Not only do you weave an interesting story with romance and sex, but it has an incredible Japanese flavor too. I spent my childhood in Japan and reading your story brings it all back so clearly. Especially your descriptions of Noboru which remind me how Japanese men typically act. Though the chapters are short, I am truly enjoying the "werewolf" aspect and your memorable words.

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenalmost 14 years ago
Amazingly sensual

Quite a descriptive story and the character is the deepest of all stories I have read on lit. so far. Looking forward to the rest... so on I go.

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