by vinkb
I was wondering how the dart situation was going to resolve itself. Very much looking forward to the next chapter.
This chapter was short and sweet. I am so glad to see Saburo meet a suitable end. Please write more soon! This has been a fabulous story!
The brief language lessons and bits of historical background are great, and the story itself has yet to disappoint me. I like the characters, and I've enjoyed reading very much; needless to say, I await the next chapter with excitement. :D
The title says it all. Your writing style and imagination are superb but I feel like I was left hanging a bit. Please write more of this story and write more in general, because you're good.
I hope you continue this as it's really good. I have found your work extremely enjoyable to read.