by GideonW
Some minor typos and grammatical errors, but easily forgiven when the story itself was so damned hot. Got my motor runnin'. I'm only sorry that it wasn't a bit longer.
Makes me want to play Risk, oh and nail my mom and sister if I had one
Played a game like that! I liked the rules... and the sex. I hope for a sequel.
The setting of mood throught the game was great. However, I think it would have been even more erotic if the sex had not been so "wham, bam, thank you, ma'am".
I loved it. Very original idea. I think the sex part could have been expanded a bit more, seemed kind of rushed, but it was still better than most stories.
There has to be a sequel..or two, or three! The ending leaves the door open for countless possibilities of what will happen in future games of Risk.
...but it all turned out well in the END. He took them both on even tho he lost the 'game', I'd say that he won the 'world war' & I'd besurprised if he didn't want a re-match. I mean, there is NO WAY he can lose!
I have a wife and two daughters... When the girls turn eighteen can we borrow your game and those same rules..?
As a veteran Risk player, I of course gravitated to this story, and I wasn't disappointed, although it was an odd twist, having it be them who won and sprung the sex on him rather than the other way around. Nice conspiracy element, there. Keep it up!
A little slow starting out but once you got going was very good. Please continue the story.
fat chicks and big tits are a turn off except to underage boys.