All Comments on 'The River'

Outstanding!

Wonderful. A second chapter is requested. The sleeping bag awaits the lovers.

Good story! Lots of personality and sexual tension.

Very nice. Expressive writing setting a wonderful scene for the hot sex. Look forward to overnight in the sleeping bag.

Beautifully descriptive and erotic.

Beautifully written story and the first-time gay sex was extremely HOT. But now that this young man has his cock between Gunter's butt cheeks are you going to let him do something with it? Will this hot sexy ***** story see a chapter #2? PLEASE! MLF

Wow! So erotic, lustful, hot and beautiful. Love it!

Thank you for such a lovely, sexy and beautifully written story. I am looking forward to the next chapter if one is forthcoming.

A very tantalizing build up to my own preccum!

Please continue the story for my anal delite.

Wonderfully written, excellent imagiery!

Please continue the story.

Darn, Just finished reading and I am as hard as a rock! Well done!!!

Great story, very descriptive, very hot sex. Loved it. More please!

I am so pleased that the posting of Ch. 02 brought me here to the beginning of this glorious story! This is brilliant, dear Author. Following you now for more of this merriment!

'Lovely writing and a tender, hot story. You are a very skilled writer. Thank you.

Use spell check. Waste / waist

It's distracting.

There are other spelling errors that take away from the words.

Spell check. Please.