All Comments on 'The Road Not Taken'

A well written erotic tale. Thanks

I thought this is some of your best writing, the build up was great I did not even mind it was 5 pages, you are fast becoming one of my favorite writers on the site

Just loved it. Mega kudos!

wonderful read,loved it.

That was so goooood! Great in fact. Loved loved loved it.

I've assumed all along that you've been posting stories in the order they were written. If I'm right, then it's possible to see how far you've come. Each new tale you're putting up shows greater skill and "The Road Not Taken" has to be one of the best if not the best yet. Congratulations, Ann.

That was excellent. And the climax when Jennifer teased Sally was great. Sorry, too many double meanings there.

I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. The retort Jennifer used to chastise Sally over not including a strap on in her planning was both well placed in the story and telling in the character. Loved it.

You have left doors open to additional chapters among Sally's threesome friends and the island resort which could be fun if the thought you put into this story continues. I'd enjoy reading more from you. Seduction is key to holding me as a reader. Well, that and the bush on Jennifer held me as a reader.

Thanks for sharing!

Jenifer is very plausible and convincing, and I can understand her and identify.

Sally is an adorable and cute.

Their relationship is interesting and the story moves at a well written pace, and the sex is oh. Really well written.

And I so love your acceptance of colour and race, something which shows all over your work.

You are a good writer. A nice balance of dialogue and descriptive narrative. And a sweet story with two very real characters.

Anne, thank you absolutely loved the story,not that girl on girl does much for me, but the romance, and acceptance really ring bells.

Northpacific

Always sooo good! Thanks yet again.

ImNIndy now in Corpus Christi

I love reading your stories, they are full of eroticism, sex, seduction, and romance. Thank you for sharing them with us!

Your stories are simply amazing,you are such a good writer.Thank you for sharing

love them both...

tho, regarding Jen and her 'hairy bush'...you write it like it's a bad thing...?

'..Amber's túnnel of love...'...you have a way with words...

5 and fave story-already had you fave author

So arousing! I came every time Jennifer did! What a tale!

All the best,

Kathy

Had more fun reading this, than I have had in a long time. Great story, good pacing, and the "perverting" Jennifer was perfect.