All Comments on 'The Road Trip'

Yes please on part 2

An excellent start to what I hope to be a saga, I'd love to read the next installment

Very good IMHO. Look forward to meeting Sam.

Looking forward to "Meeting Sam" but PLEASE make that the secondary title and call it The Road Trip Part 2. Too many authors fail to provide the essential link that new readers in years to come will need to navigate through your expected growing list of contributions.

Of course, we wanna read the next installment

Yes,I'd like to read the next chapter.

Nice start to a mini series I think..

Please post more of this.

Really enjoyed this, but as another suggested, please keep the title and make it Ch. 02. Otherwise it may be overlooked as there is no link.

We definitely need more...maybe even 2 chapters...gotta meet Sam and see where the future lies for these two

Sweet and believable. I liked the way the two slowly got to know and feel comfortable with each other. Nice story. Thanks.

Yes, you should definitely post a second chapter and more.

Boyd Percy

Oh yeah! I liked the story and the story line of their meeting. I liked the characters and their interaction. I look forward to you developing them and sharing their experiences and discoveries. By all means bring Sam into the picture. I'm sure she will be a great add on character. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Two likeable people and a dog, what's not to like? And now Sam onto the mix ... this could go a number of ways.

Please continue and post chapter 2.

I don't much about Sam, but it would be fun to read more about TJ and Emma and their future.

By all means. After reading the first installment I am longing for more.

Well done.

Great story well written. You could make this an exhaustive series with lots of chapters. I’d read them all and no doubt they’d be 5*, like this one.

A quick little romance with an experienced young lady and a man who has been solitary since losing his wife. I thought it went well, and it was very readable.

Lue

I hope to read a lot more about this couple! Very hot story :)

I like the start. For further enjoyment the characters need more depth, but for the first part of the story it's good enough and well done. Hope to read more about them and hopefully Sam too.

Post it. The first chapter was lovely. Cannot wait for more~

I agree with the comment by McMahons- much less confusing to future readers if you make it Road Trip Part 2 and so on for future. Put meeting Sam in the description after the title.

Really nice story. More character development would be nice as well.

Don't be afraid of making it longer. I think a lot of readers enjoy getting involved with the characters in a longer story.

Sehen the next part yet? 😁

BTW I loved the 1st part!

Post it. The first chapter was lovely. Cannot wait for more~

Please post part 2!