All Comments on 'The Rock'

Great story. JR must have nuts the size of a mustard seed trying to please 8 ladies but hope you keep going till he is rich and has a car of his on . Thank you

Dumbass story....Nice fantasy that you could control people with your mind....Clearly impossible....

A nice fantasy but a little confusing. Near the end of the story the woman told him that he had broken the spell of the rock and he will not be able to add any more women to his circle but then at the end she tells him he can think of anything and it will happen.

Thanks for sharing your story. Unfortunately, it just wasn't for me. The extremely short paragraphs and typos made it really hard to read. Perhaps Literotica's volunteer copyediting program could help?

The protagonist was annoying as shit then get rewarded for being a bipolar undecisive cunt.

They all need to be bred with your spawn, especially mom & sis. Add your Aunt & Grandmother to your list. Good read. 5☆

Not sure if this should fall completely in Taboo/Incest, as it has the Mind Control aspect to it. Incest/Mind Control/Harem

Great story, I would like to have more.

This story's premise feels uncannily similar to a thread on CYOC.net, if without the physical transformations. It also reads as disjointed as a lot of those submissions. JR turns family and colleagues into an obedient but zero-chemistry harem through nothing more than accidental whims, for which he shows -no- remorse until a hypocritical declaration when he re-encounters the mysterious benefactor. Never mind the basic textual errors: were the plot in service of a cohesive theme, it may have been enjoyable in spirit, instead of what begins and ends as a facile power trip by an unlikable lead.