All Comments on 'The Role Players Pt. 03'

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hollygurl29hollygurl29almost 6 years agoAuthor
Please?

To the anonymous individual who keeps posting her sexting messages on my stories, please stop. The stories are for the enjoyment of the readers here and not for your personal ads or trolling purposes. There are other places for what you are seeking and this is not one of them. Your words are inappropriate and have no bearing on my story. Thank you.

Holly

RhondaParker54RhondaParker54almost 6 years ago
Thank you

Thank you hollygurl29 just loved this Pt. 03 don't you dare get writers block can't wait to read more about Holly's next adventure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
loving it

loving your story holygurl makes a change to the usual forced fem stuff would love to find a job likes Holly,s doing want you really love looking forward to part 4

Biggs2102Biggs2102almost 6 years ago
Great!

Your writing style is great I found myself easily flying throught the first 3 parts of this story. I await your further submissions, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Terrific Holly!

"Liquid velvet"...a perfect description! A very erotic story. I am treasuring each chapter. 5 stars!

TanniaLingTanniaLingover 5 years ago
Unique storyline

This is a very unique storyline unlike any others I’ve read. I could easily see all sorts of spinoffs. Your writing style flows so easily and keeps me hot without coming to a quick end. Only complaint I had was about how quickly Holly decided that men were OK for her after all. Would have liked to see a touch more internal conflict

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I have a full length novel available if you might be interested. It is called The Master Plan and is available on Amazon for Kindle or the Kindle reading application. It can be found under the author name William Womack.

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