All Comments on 'The Romantic Vacation Ch. 02'

by sleepyhousewife

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26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Sleepywhorewife, yet another Slut writer for the LW garbage collecters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
mixed up names

Terry or Terri

Terri or Lisa get your names sorted as it spoils the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
your?

i enjoyed the story, but the misuse of words makes it difficult. you're is the contraction for you are. your denotes ownership. your panties are pretty. you're removing your panties. if you write "your", you should be able to substitute "my" and still have the sentence make sense.

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