by julie_
I don't do incest stories and tho there was a disclaimer, I thought maybe it was a situation that happened when they (sisters) were little, like under 10 years old during the confusing and experimental time before puberty. But these sisters were 18 & 20. I read just enough to start having negative feelings about the story. Not to harp on it or get all judgemental, it's not my thang. As a big sister, my role is to protect my baby sister not sex her. To the author, what little I read, you had little to no grammatical errors, sentence structure and layout was decent. I encourage you to continue writing, but for me not in this vein. A true lesbian story would be nice since this is the Lesbian Category. On Literotica, there's an "app" for that (incest). Thank you and all the best
I agree with some of the others. I would love to have more pages and chapters of this their story, because I want to know if Rachel find a Lesbian partner for herself or did she and her sister stay together for the rest of their lifetime as in wife and wife even though they are sisters.
Some good writing and an excellent intro, but where’s the rest ?