All Comments on 'The Roommate Ch. 01'

Congratulations on your first story! I look forward to seeing where this all goes!

11/10 stars please continue this

For a first story, you did great. Action, sex and mystery is a perfect beginning for any story but even more so for your first. I look forward to checking out the next chapter.

Agent X

Замечательно получилось. Жду продолжения.

Dammmmm I am truely lost for words this story has a FANTASTIC building block you've started with and I can only see it going up and up. Especially with the character establishment at the start that was epic also with the situation and the opening scenes. CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.

It could use a good editing. The story also seemed to just meander around. I would think she might be more effected by all but witnessing a murder and coming close to being killed herself; yet that trauma seems to be forgotten almost instantly.

Interesting concept. I look forward to where this goes

Wow!! The ultimate futa fantasy!!! Girl you got my panties soooooo wet! Can’t wait for the next chapter.!!! Love it!! futa fulfill me, plee~ease!