by RoseB
You're killing me with anticipation Rose! This is arguably one of my favourite series in both erotic and non-erotic circles. Please post again soon :*
I love all the stories so far.. totally enthralled.. but sec just didn't meat up to the rest for some reason.. still all in though
Wow, just wow.
Another thrilling chapter really enjoyed this one, I hope the next part is up quickly!
Kudos to you for all the effort you put into these!
Ps: Thanks for the early read, I really appreciate it. Keep up the good work!
That was such a good read, agonizing to wait for part two but delighted when i saw this part on my feed. What a ride, so TENSE. thanks. As ever i look forward to the next chaper with gusto.
Im sorry, im not really the kinda person to celebrate homicide, but if i said that i didnt grin ear to ear in excitement when Peter shanked that foul bitch in the ribs, id be lying lol
Once again, youve managed to keep me absolutely RIVITED to my phone screen reading your story! I said it once and ill say it again; if not for the sexual focus, this would be a book i would easily recommend to my friends. Cant wait for the next chapter!
Hot damn, I read this in an earlier chapter, but you have talent. Like I now read this because it’s just fucking art dude, and somehow this became so compelling, I forget it’s an erotic story and just want to read what comes next it’s so good.
First, thank you all for your kind comments! I really appreciate the emails and responses from everyone. So three things:
1) Oscar did not know. That's all I'm going to say for now.
2) The next chapter is related to the interlude. It's halfway done at this moment. A lot of people didn't like the interlude but it served a purpose.
3) I'm violently ill and my writing is suffering because of it. So please bear with me. I think 14 will be up within a week.
I love this story but its wrecking my mind please miss r a little mercy or at least a merciful end for doll... I mean peter
I just got better and my writing skills have recovered.
Anon 1: Uhhhh, maybe a week. But no more than 2 till Ch.14
Anon 2: I'm glad you enjoy this tale. However you'll find very little mercy in this act. Well some. But not a lot. Act 2 is in parts far worse than act 1. Also, it didn't even register than you called me Miss R. I thought you were legitmately begging the character.
can’t wait to read more <33 also sorry that ure sick it’s flu season get those flu shots baby xx
Chapter 14 is still pending. Not much I can do about that. If you want an early copy, feel free to send me some feedback with your email and I'll gladly send it to you. I'm considering opening a discord server as well for updates and real-time chat with other fans/me. If you're interested, please email me as well.
Thank you for your continued support everyone!
-RoseB
Literotica rejected Chapter 14. If it isn't rejected again, it'll be up in a few days at the least.