All Comments on 'The Rose Diaries Ch. 20'

Damn. I didn't know an erotica could be this intense I clenched my buttcheeks from the beginning to the end. I can't wait to see where this goes. I didn't really care about the sex scenes now but the whole plot in general, It is extraordinary. This is hands down the best erotica I've ever read

He's (she's?) going to kick himself when he realises that the correct solution is to put both their heads in line with the muzzle, then pull the trigger. Walk up to Daniel, put the muzzle against his temple and move his head in line with the bore on the other side of Daniel's head. Escape Blackstone and the incoming punishment for one of them in the scenario described.

Also how are Charm and Luck doing? Last we heard they were going to start working at the manor (or was that scout work outside?). Charm seemed nice.

''He liked Mistress Charm.

She was still his captor. She was still a threat that would need to be dealt with. But she was actually a person! Not just some cruel bitch who wanted to see him suffer. She was so much more. ''

PS love your body of work. Not just for the depravity of the situation (I do hope it's not autobiographical) but for your skill as a writer.

Rose woman your getting a bit brutal I am just wondering if it’s a blank in the gun . I have never felt so invested in a Character as I have poor Peter . These women are for sure such evil bitches ..

Waited ages and now a cliffhanger D: loving the story as per usual though

What I’m hoping is that he shoots off the collar, and we get a sequence where both of them end up on the run for awhile, prison break style

I dont understand, did Doll simply forget her collar would shock her if she left the mansion? All this planning plotting grifting grimicing and bearing blackstone for an opertunity and she forgets the collar will shock her?