All Comments on 'The Rose Diaries Ch. 24'

I think the ending of this could of been drawn out and concluded a lot better than this. It skipped the whole entire breaking her after they caught her and her acceptance. There was a lot in 3 years that’s missed. I’d really like to hear about roses life heading up to that day in bora bora. Where she snaps again. What the misses do to them when they get them back home. This feels like a really rushed ending to a really good story.

Honestly not surprised peter was fully erased kind of saw that coming. Hope the others got away and we’re smart to keep going. Going home was a bad idea. I love this story very much thank you for writing it. As well as I’m glad for a happy ending. Yes peter is gone and rose is there instead. I wish I knew more on how that was possible I’m guessing mind wiping of some kind which is why Peter is only in her dreams now. Great ending!

I know a lot of you will be upset at the ending but when you read the epilogue you'll understand why the ending had to be this way. Get ready it's gonna hurt

my boy Pete was so close, you figure that after being smart enough to get out of there they’d be smart enough to not take a goddamn plane. Literally trying to outwit a probably multi million dollar organization with connections across the country, but let’s not be cautious or anything, let’s take a plane

can't figure out what you are doing to peter where did he go

So, I know that this is a short entry. But it had to be this way. When I started writing this story almost a year ago, I knew this was how it was going to end. Not with any elaboration or knowing how Peter Baker fell but the cold harsh reality that he did. These characters are only human and have human limitations. It was rather depressing that this was the inevitable conclusion of his story.

As for the details, that's what the epilogue is for.

That was so fucking depressing wow

So no surprise the ending was going to be that, the poor choices were made. depressing to be sure so the bad guys win in the end.

For me, this is really the good end, because the epilogue showing me how crude was rose transformation kind of overkilled much for me.

Great story, fascinating and I kind of of got some PTSD from It from the physical violence but i like this story, you are a great writer, keep on, love your writing, it gets on my skin on a good and a bad way and that's wonderful