by Bellie444
Glad to see more of the story. Have been waiting. Please continue you are a great writer.
That was so intense!! Loved that whole build up and rescue scene!! Such great writing, I love your work. Thank you!!
You certainly have loaded the cart with a lot of new players. Hector is after Tessa, Luca is after Kat, Bill and Jett are at risk from both villains and somewhere in the shadows are Jett's family and a Lycan group trying to find Tessa. This is going to be a nice set of combatants and I can't wait for the fur to fly.
Tssss. Ow, ow. That was hot, Pretty. One of your best, in my humble. Stopped what I was doing to finish it. I’ll be checking in.
Oh my god!!! Thank you for updating. I’ve been looking forward to this. What an action packed chapter, thank you thank you. It feels like the beginning of a wild story. I hope your creative juices continue to flow. Cannot wait for more. Also, love Cat, what a Firefox.
What a wonderful surprise to see chapter two of this story! I can see hints that this one will turn out just as hot and exciting as the assassins bride and I cant wait to see what happens. I wonder what Hector is if he isnt a lycan or at least not able to impregnate her with a lycan child. There are some interesting politics going on. And the whole situation with Cat and Bill is hothothot.
Thank you for coming back to this story with such an exciting and very yummy chapter! I'm hopeful that you'll continue this story sooner, rather than later. Thank you again!
This has got to be your best by a country mile. Please please please please please please please don’t make us wait too long for the next chapters
Ack!!! I'm totally cursing you out right now with a grin on my face. I wasn't sure where you were going with this but FUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK! I'm so fucking in for the ride now. Part of me wants to believe that you're not sadistic enough to be literally leaving us wanting more at the end of each chapter but I am not entirely sure. Write faster damn it!!!! :D
Yesss!! I've been patiently waiting for this story to continue. This chapter was amazing!
Please for the love of all that is holy get rid of all the adjectives. Holy crap. Your writing would be a good deal better if you addressed that. I enjoy the story line but trying to glaze over the incessant use of adjectives is really hard.
You're such an amazing writer and even though this is your work, you're the only one I can trust to ride this through with a bang. I'm so excited to read the next chapter. Hopefully won't take a year, please and thank you!
Really glad you came back to this. I had given up. Love their chemistry. Just wish there was less of bill and cat. Felt like half the chapter was wasted on them. Looking forward to more.
Please finish this one ASAP. I came here every 3 days average to look for the next chapter. I read everything you have written in the interim. You are a good writer Bellie.
Was starting to think this story would be left unfinished, so what a pleasant surprise to find another chapter!
I've read most of your stories on this site and I think this one is your best yet!
I enjoy the introduction of new characters, but Tessa and Jett's story are what keep me coming back.
PLEASE continue. I know real life can get in the way, so thank you for taking time out of your busy life to share your talent.
this is one of your best Bellie! please please keep going, we're invested now xx
I enjoy your work so very much! This is some of your best work yet and I cannot wait to read more. I'm addicted to the Tess and Jett plot and want to know more about Jetts' background and how they continue to resist each other. Looking forward to reading much more of this storyline. Thank you for your time and talent!
Dang, bummed to read the first two chapters and discover there's nothing more. Do you plan to continue this story? It's really well written!
I love this story! Please author continue writing this wonderful masterpiece 😭
You should write for wettpad and put out more chapters. Could be a good story on there.
According to the lit gods Ch 3 should come out on the 30th. Sorry for the wait guys.
Brilliant! Did he leave Hector the would be rapist alive? That’s such a bad move.
Thx.
Tess (uk)