by Bellie444
Well, I always thought I didn't like this genre, but you do the kidnapped innocent girl so well, that in your hands, well, I confess: I loved it. Plus, it made me f**king curious as to what's going to happen. So if you know what's good for you, Bellie, you will come up with a part two quickly, or Jett might come after you in the dark of night, and it won't be pretty! Five Stars, obviously.
I'm a fan. Look forward to seeing future bits but if this ends up being the only one then very well written ^~^
I HOPE TO GOODNESS THIS ISN'T OVER IT HAS THE MAKINGS OF ONE OF THE BEST EVERY! KEEP GOING AND PLEASE MAKE IT SNAPPY- CHEERS
So very good! Thank you for sharing this with us, I can't wait to read more of it!
THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT START, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST OF THE CHAPTERS. YOU ARE EXCELLENT, BTW.
I need more! Lots more!
Well written with a thought out plot line. Thank you.
I accidentally hit 1 star and the system wouldn't let me fix it. I'm so sorry. I meant to hit 5 stars!
Wow, I was on the edge of my seat reading this, I love the characters, please write more!!!
Amazing. Once I started I couldn’t put it down. By far my favorite story on this site. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Just checked the site and found this, you! Thank you for the story. I like what you’ve done with it. Readers want more. I’d love to know what happens. -Uncle
This was so good, very interesting and Intriguing start. I can't wait to see more! Your stories are my favorite
Wonderful start... well written with very few typo's. Good plotline and characters...
Hope you put this on the front burner!!!
Thanks everyone!
I am absolutely floored by the unexpected response to this first chapter. Thank you for the kind votes and words! Will try and put another one out in a timely matter.. pressure’s on 😉 x
Love all your stories; this one is intriguing. Perched on the edge of my seat waiting impatiently for more...
"I wrote this about a year ago" and it ends with cliffhanger.
Oh god, sometimes waiting for updates is worse punishment than cane and actually seeing them better than aftercare.
Sci-fi is not really my thing, except for TSM, but this pair you have created has me. Next chapter is already in the works we hope, speaking for your readers. But for now: bravos.
Please continue this story! I can't wait!
You an amazing write. Every story captivates me, but this one especially.
Just checking in to see if there was a new chapter. See that this first chapter is already in the Hall of Fame. Guess that only shows the readers appreciation of just the beginning of this story and their enthusiasm for more chapters. Hopefully that has meaning for the so talented author. Hint.
Hi!
Thank you for your comment on my story, The Witch and the Hunter. I think your The Royal Lycan story is shaping up to be my favorite of the ones you have written so far. You are very talented and so prolific! If you ever need a beta reader I'd be happy to help. :)
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Amazing concept, amazing execution - I hope this story calls to your creativity and you continue w it! If not, that's ok too though, all your writing is amazing!
This is so enthralling - thanks for writing. I definitely want more!
I’ve read most of what you’ve released and this has been by far my favorite. Please keep at it because I see this having the potential for so much more!
Not your average nonconsent story! Looking forward to part 2!!!!!
I love this story! You’re such an excellent writer - I appreciate how you build plot and look forward to reading the next part you release (I hope it’s soon!)
Please continue this story! I love the characters already.
So excited for more!!! What an interesting element to this story. I love what you have going already. I can only hope your creative juices are flowing!!! I just left a review for Voyeur and I’m not sure if it showed up, but long story short- one of my fav completed piece of work from you! Worth reading again and again. I can’t get enough of Ben and Rachel and why do I feel like it might be the same of Jett and Tessa? Hmm maybe not totally the same, but another ship I love!! You are amazing at NCN, though all the same category, every story has a different feel, different aspect of NCN. You’re great!
This is shaping up to be a really good story. Interesting characters and I love the werewolf angle. So intriguing.
Love the story so.far, especially the werewolf angle. Please continue; can't wait for the next installment. :)
I have been checking on this for months hoping that there is another chapter. Please add!
So I can catch the sequel to this one it - hopefully!- comes out:)
I NEED MORE THIS CANT BE OVER PLEASE TELL ME THERES MORE I WANT MOREEEEEEEE
Please continue this story. I check to see if there's a part 2 way too often. Your writing style is phenomenal.
your writing style is phenomenal. I can't get enough! Please continue.
This is one of my favorites of your stories! Please, please continue it!
This is my absolute favorite of your stories - I check back all the time to see if there’s more - please, please continue!!
Why are bothering with anything else when you've got a golden story like this one! Are you even listening to your devoted fans? I'm tired of pleading and begging so I'm switching to flat out shaming you for emotional cruelty! This wasn't ever a one off given the way it ended so why won't you give us more? Is it some kind of game to see how many comments & stars you can get? I for one won't be reading anything else you write until this is continued and believe me, I've read everything up until now. Seriously you're killing me here! I've just got to know what happens next!
Good news from your bio page that chapter two is in the works. I don't know how pick what you work on when you are a finite resource and have a number of stories running concurrently. Cupid and Psyche (completed), The Royal Lycan, The Ward and Oxman are all fine stories. Which ever of the three unfinished tales you choose to work on it will be appreciated, however................
Maybe you'll be inspired after the completion Semiosis50's Clans of Luteri to update a beastly tale of your own?? 😀 I know it's in the works, but please have mercy on us! The year's been long and your writing's been missed!
this is my 2nd fav from one of yours after cupid
and the3rd would be the ward followed by voyuer
overpowered at office was the one i both loved and hated
loved it for the cummilicious bj and facefuck hottest bj discription ever with hot humiliation and hot impregish thing
hated it due to the blackmailing video he made of her it was heartbreaking from any pov