All Comments on 'The Royal Lycan'

by Bellie444

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 4 years ago

Well, I always thought I didn't like this genre, but you do the kidnapped innocent girl so well, that in your hands, well, I confess: I loved it. Plus, it made me f**king curious as to what's going to happen. So if you know what's good for you, Bellie, you will come up with a part two quickly, or Jett might come after you in the dark of night, and it won't be pretty! Five Stars, obviously.

PrincessValkyPrincessValkyabout 4 years ago

I'm a fan. Look forward to seeing future bits but if this ends up being the only one then very well written ^~^

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
WOW! WOW! WOW!

I HOPE TO GOODNESS THIS ISN'T OVER IT HAS THE MAKINGS OF ONE OF THE BEST EVERY! KEEP GOING AND PLEASE MAKE IT SNAPPY- CHEERS

TSreaderTSreaderabout 4 years ago
So good!

So very good! Thank you for sharing this with us, I can't wait to read more of it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT START, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST OF THE CHAPTERS. YOU ARE EXCELLENT, BTW.

IvymarieIvymarieabout 4 years ago

I'm giddy over this story! Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More, PLEASE!!

I need more! Lots more!

Well written with a thought out plot line. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I was trying to give it 5 stars

I accidentally hit 1 star and the system wouldn't let me fix it. I'm so sorry. I meant to hit 5 stars!

EvalynEvalynEvalynEvalynabout 4 years ago

Really really good! Can't wait for the next parts!! I'm intrigued

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Please write more!!!!

Wow, I was on the edge of my seat reading this, I love the characters, please write more!!!

Need2readitNeed2readitabout 4 years ago
Love love love this story

Amazing. Once I started I couldn’t put it down. By far my favorite story on this site. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

semiosis50semiosis50about 4 years ago
Howl! It’s out!

Just checked the site and found this, you! Thank you for the story. I like what you’ve done with it. Readers want more. I’d love to know what happens. -Uncle

Yvonne98Yvonne98about 4 years ago
Please write the next chapter!!

This was so good, very interesting and Intriguing start. I can't wait to see more! Your stories are my favorite

sweetone66sweetone66about 4 years ago
Please continue until finished with this...

Wonderful start... well written with very few typo's. Good plotline and characters...

Hope you put this on the front burner!!!

Bellie444Bellie444about 4 years agoAuthor
Whoah

Thanks everyone!

I am absolutely floored by the unexpected response to this first chapter. Thank you for the kind votes and words! Will try and put another one out in a timely matter.. pressure’s on 😉 x

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Disappointed

This was a true waste of my time

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 4 years ago
Really hope you finish this and

post it quickly!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing! More so than usual :)

Love all your stories; this one is intriguing. Perched on the edge of my seat waiting impatiently for more...

F0styF0styabout 4 years ago

"I wrote this about a year ago" and it ends with cliffhanger.

Oh god, sometimes waiting for updates is worse punishment than cane and actually seeing them better than aftercare.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Really loved it

Hope you also wrote all the other chapters a year ago too!

Horseman68Horseman68about 4 years ago
Five Stars +

Sci-fi is not really my thing, except for TSM, but this pair you have created has me. Next chapter is already in the works we hope, speaking for your readers. But for now: bravos.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing

Please continue this story! I can't wait!

You an amazing write. Every story captivates me, but this one especially.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
<3

I really hope you're inspired to continue this soon! So good.

Horseman68Horseman68almost 4 years ago
Hall of Fame Already.

Just checking in to see if there was a new chapter. See that this first chapter is already in the Hall of Fame. Guess that only shows the readers appreciation of just the beginning of this story and their enthusiasm for more chapters. Hopefully that has meaning for the so talented author. Hint.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I literally check every day to see if there's an update.

geek_writergeek_writeralmost 4 years ago
More more more!

This was amazing, please continue!

SofBlackSofBlackalmost 4 years ago

Hi!

Thank you for your comment on my story, The Witch and the Hunter. I think your The Royal Lycan story is shaping up to be my favorite of the ones you have written so far. You are very talented and so prolific! If you ever need a beta reader I'd be happy to help. :)

Sof

NoFillaNoFillaalmost 4 years ago
Amazing Potential

Amazing concept, amazing execution - I hope this story calls to your creativity and you continue w it! If not, that's ok too though, all your writing is amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More please!

This is so enthralling - thanks for writing. I definitely want more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please write more!

I’ve read most of what you’ve released and this has been by far my favorite. Please keep at it because I see this having the potential for so much more!

AuthoroffilthAuthoroffilthalmost 4 years ago
Non-Human

Not your average nonconsent story! Looking forward to part 2!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please continue this story!

I love this story! You’re such an excellent writer - I appreciate how you build plot and look forward to reading the next part you release (I hope it’s soon!)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please continue

Please continue this story! I love the characters already.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Ahh

So excited for more!!! What an interesting element to this story. I love what you have going already. I can only hope your creative juices are flowing!!! I just left a review for Voyeur and I’m not sure if it showed up, but long story short- one of my fav completed piece of work from you! Worth reading again and again. I can’t get enough of Ben and Rachel and why do I feel like it might be the same of Jett and Tessa? Hmm maybe not totally the same, but another ship I love!! You are amazing at NCN, though all the same category, every story has a different feel, different aspect of NCN. You’re great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fantastic

This is shaping up to be a really good story. Interesting characters and I love the werewolf angle. So intriguing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
more! more! more!00

Love the story so.far, especially the werewolf angle. Please continue; can't wait for the next installment. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Love it

Omg this is such a promising first chapter! Please post more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please!

I have been checking on this for months hoping that there is another chapter. Please add!

Laura1234Laura1234over 3 years ago
Just added you to my favorites listt

So I can catch the sequel to this one it - hopefully!- comes out:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I NEED MORE THIS CANT BE OVER PLEASE TELL ME THERES MORE I WANT MOREEEEEEEE

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please Continue

Please continue this story. I check to see if there's a part 2 way too often. Your writing style is phenomenal.

MistressMissy08MistressMissy08over 3 years ago

your writing style is phenomenal. I can't get enough! Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please continue!

This is one of my favorites of your stories! Please, please continue it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More

Need more this story is good!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
My favorite of your stories

This is my absolute favorite of your stories - I check back all the time to see if there’s more - please, please continue!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
OH COME ON ALREADY!

Why are bothering with anything else when you've got a golden story like this one! Are you even listening to your devoted fans? I'm tired of pleading and begging so I'm switching to flat out shaming you for emotional cruelty! This wasn't ever a one off given the way it ended so why won't you give us more? Is it some kind of game to see how many comments & stars you can get? I for one won't be reading anything else you write until this is continued and believe me, I've read everything up until now. Seriously you're killing me here! I've just got to know what happens next!

EGRIEGRIover 3 years ago
There is a light at the end of the tunnel

Good news from your bio page that chapter two is in the works. I don't know how pick what you work on when you are a finite resource and have a number of stories running concurrently. Cupid and Psyche (completed), The Royal Lycan, The Ward and Oxman are all fine stories. Which ever of the three unfinished tales you choose to work on it will be appreciated, however................

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
More Please!!!

You've gotta continue brilliant story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Love it! Great story has me hook line and sinker

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Take your time with this because this really really really has promise.

AnimarisAnimarisabout 3 years ago

Maybe you'll be inspired after the completion Semiosis50's Clans of Luteri to update a beastly tale of your own?? 😀 I know it's in the works, but please have mercy on us! The year's been long and your writing's been missed!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I need more! Love this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Love, love, love this! Great intro; love the characters already!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

this is my 2nd fav from one of yours after cupid

and the3rd would be the ward followed by voyuer

overpowered at office was the one i both loved and hated

loved it for the cummilicious bj and facefuck hottest bj discription ever with hot humiliation and hot impregish thing

hated it due to the blackmailing video he made of her it was heartbreaking from any pov

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Brilliant start! Love this.

Tess (uk)

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