All Comments on 'The Running Partner'

Great premise.

BUT YOU NEED AN EDITOR. BADLY! THERE ARE SO MANY ISSUES THAT DISTRACT FROM THE STORY.

And you left readers hanging. He fingers her asshole. She tells him to insert his finger a bit. END?

And not even hint of any titty fucking.

Had 5-star potential.

Four stars.

Thanks for your feedback, really appreciated. This is an older story I wrote quite a while ago. I thought I'd post it anyway.

Although not every story needs a titty fuck 😉

this story has legs, i hope you keep it going.

Good story!

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*****Damn he ran into some HOT Mature stuff!!! Makes you want to buy some running shoes. Very entertaining read. Thanks For sharing.

You wrote a story worth I very high star count, but your incorrect grammar, wrong word for the word you were intending, spelling, missing words, and more, just interrupted the flow of your story. Try next time to proof read and edit before posting. I would have give you 5 stars, especially as a new story person here, but it was just so frustrating with all the hesitations to know why you meant with such errors. JEF

I don't know, maybe as a non-native English speaker, I'm not qualified to make such comments, but for real - I noticed maybe a couple of typos, nothing much! And it didn't spoil my fun with reading at all! I enjoyed your story, I think it was crafted well, with enough build-up and character development.

I like that it wasn't like this "Omg, my mom's friend is so hot. Omg, she is into me. Omg, I just fucked my mom's friend" and all in the scope of 2k words, you know what I mean? :) There are plenty of rushed stories, with absurd plot lines and shallow characters. Your story definitely wasn't one of them and that's what I appreciate. 5 stars!

Excellent! Would like to see their relationship continue.

Soccer / football is played on a pitch.

Volleyball is played on a court.

There is "Seepak takraw", which is played on a court, like volleyball, with your feet.