All Comments on 'The Saga of Tythoros Ch. 01'

Quick sex scene then you kill off what appears to be the main character. This story line is dead. What are we doing the next chapter 18 years in the future.. sigh. Would have been so much better had the "hero" been proud of being the daddy of a god

1. The hero of the story has just been born.

2. Regrettably, Pheira had to be killed off for reasons that pertain to the next chapter.

3. Aside from Pheira, we're not done with any of these characters just yet.

Thanks for reading!

Having read many a myth, a nice start. I look forward to the next chapter.

Sadly, you may have to wait a while. My editor and I have come to agree that the timing might be better to continue the story after the Winter Contest. However, I'll continue to write in the meantime and I hope you'll be around to keep reading.

Thanks so much for the comment!

I had finally found time to read the first chapter, and everything flows nicely, tragic for Tythoros' mother

To this day, I wish that I could've given Pheira a happier ending. Ah, well. Thanks for reading!

JC

Wow this chapter was bad. no way in hell any princess in her right mind with sleep with a servant.