All Comments on 'The Salon'

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 11 years ago
Not fair

I had a haircut too last night, and this didn't happen for me. I was the last customer too.

It must be because I'm not a Doctor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Grammar

Second page was one paragraph, might want to check formatting closer after it is posted to make sure all is correct. That was a hard read.

AnonymessAnonymessover 11 years ago
Hot hot hot

Loved it!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Brilliant! Well done! This could easily be a best selling erotic novel. Keep it up!

This story wa absolutely amazing, it was hot and steamy an yet included an almost romantic side to it. I think if you went to publish this as an erotic novel tue shelves would almost certainly empty within moments!

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