All Comments on 'The Same Coin'

Possibly the best erotica I've ever read. Because you're not just interested in the sex, you're interested in the characters. You truly are an author. And it made this piece so much hotter.

I was initially hesitant to read a short story based on known characters, but you did splendidly. It is so hard to write for brevity and to include sufficient detail and emotion - you succeeded!

I look forward to more.

Yes! I have such a hard time writing short stories. Because of that, I rarely do it, so I’m really glad you think I succeeded! Thank you very much for reading and commenting.

This was a great story! The characters were captivating. The story held your interest throughout until the wonderful conclusion! Keep writing!

I loved how you gave use detail in the abstract, and how you made Ares' desire for her jump off the page. It was super hot, their chemistry. I'd love to see more!

Thank you... I haven't enjoyed reading a story this much in a long time!

Smoking hot! More please!!!

Muy caliente! Loved this story and sincerely hope you also finish "From What I've Tasted of Desire"!