by SpotInTheSand
I like the story and how his character develops... as a lady I should probably take issue with the scavenger hunt if meaningless sex but ... Sometimes even us naughty ladies need that too!! I didn't see any errors, but as authors I know we always see things that others don't! Can't wait for more!
great story, I think it has good pacing in terms of the setup, the sex itself is good, looking forward to reading more!