All Comments on 'The Scavenger Hunt Ch. 01'

Look forward to more. Clean, quick pace, fun to read. Lots to the characters with economy of language. Thanks!

Very good start to a series. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Story itself is pretty well written, but in the category of "group sex" with only a 1 on 1 encounter in this chapter and arguably non-consent since she was "high as a kite" and therefore not in a position to truly consent to what she was doing.... Would have been better to leave that detail out.

Fun and amusing. Any story with college morons like Beko has to be good.

This made me laugh:

The girl blinked the blink of the slightly high, or the very dumb.

"I'm here for Beko." she said.

Dumb it is.

This being the second of your stories that i've read,

you are the Top Ramen!

You have a talent for pacing and wit. I enjoyed all three in this series and read them in one sitting. You're one of the few authors here that make me laugh as well as give me the sensual jolt I'm craving. Thanks!