All Comments on 'The Script'

A new brain dead author of this genre submits this rubbish

Thanks or the effort. Apparently it is as easy as 1- 2 - 3 to get your spouse to agree to start cuckolding.

the woman is a moron and the hubby is the pervert.just don.t continue with the story cos it is boring.

Between your husband and a pimp.Seems to me not much

Wife and husband are trying fir a baby and the wife has unprotected sex with a work colleague !

This adventure might yield results they both do not want and I have not even mention STD's !

Absolutely outstanding! Extremely well written and hotter than hell. Enjoyed the read tremendously! Five stars for sure.

I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Ignore the negative comments from the morons who love to read this category and then complain that it exists, and who can neither spell nor write grammatically. They, too, are looking forward to the next installment.

Why would you turn into a slut for this worthless little pervert? This is not a marriage, its a bad porn movie, if you want a marriage like this just stay single.

Keep up to work and relate the other 4 scripts.

Thanks

behavior. Do men really want to see their wives unfaithful? If her greatest sexual memory is screwing someone else, how can they relate to each other? Does he not deserve to have a wife whose greatest time in bed was on one of their anniversaries or their honeymoon? How will she feel when.... oh forget it. Cucks rule this site.

stories that have an average rating of 3*or less... lol

Gave this only a 1; heard this story before; someone check for copy write.

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

commenter cries in a fit of shame and self-loathing how bad the story is and how much he hated it.

Damned HOT story. Hope to see more from this writer, soon.

In the future, please include an upfront warning if your story includes cuckolding. Many, many, many of us hate them and don't want to waste time starting to read them.

When he writes how great this story was, or how hot it got him. Simple, no closet cucks, just real wannabes, or some bi guys.

Previous commenter is a classic creampie-eating closet cuckold. Look for shame and denial and viola, you spotted one.

Oh, and the horns.

LOL

As the wife points out, the night is far from over. She has had a taste of a longer and thicker cock then hubby. Her pussy was stretched and filled with hard cock like never before. She only got off once and now that this stud has tasted her tight married pussy, he is going to want another go or two at it. Hope she is still on the pill or his real man seed is bound to make a bee line to her egg. And then, our new slut wife can play out 4 more scripts. To bad cuckold is not there to clean her real men cocks and her pussy.

I liked the concept of "The Script" and you told it well. It was a very exciting story !!! Please keep up the good work.

Great story. Hoping for more!

Enjoyed your first post, can't wait for the second script

You may receive advance praise and endless appreciation for your kindness to release us from Bulimarexia surrogate writing.



yours truly not fan, 
VANDERDECKEN
 (I considered not necessary to log myself for dat crap)

And you now have 2 std's and are looking for Aids to come along next. Dumb.

You ended it with there being four more scripts to follow, but five years later, nothing. Wish you would find your way back here to continue this story.

Also, wish there were no Anonymous comments allowed. Makes it too easy for haters to comment on something they clearly had no interest in or reason for being there to begin with. If you hate the story and your not ashamed to say so, use your login name. Don't hide behind Anonymous. Makes you look like a coward.

An intriguing start to an admittedly somewhat conventional theme, but you've made it enticing by your well-written style, particularly concerned the private thoughts of "Heather."

But the story seems to be an orphan! DRAT! Too bad, especially given that there are more than enough multi-part stories the probably should have been abandoned after the first chapter. I don't know how comments and registered authors ever get connected, but I hope I may have encouraged you to pick up the story again.

This idiot bitch was so sickened after this story that she never wrote again.

Really well written. Wish we had more of your writing. Ignore the critics. Why are they so angry? A pox on them.