All Comments on 'The Sea Siren'

Lovingly beautiful and sad. Thanks for the read.

Just what a literotica story should be.

This story was very hot with a touch of romance. I loved it!

This was a lovely story. I really enjoyed the romance.

you should continue this. it would be an amazing story if you finished it instead of leaving it like this.

U should continue this story.U really should give them a happy ending together.

I definitely agree, you need to continue this story and hopefully give ita happy ending. Thanks

You should think about doing a second part. Continue their story. I think it's great.

Please keep going...you've done a great job!

liked this a lot! would have loved to have seen a happier ending to this story!

That was very depressing. I'd like it if there was a follow-up. If Joel has real talent and can be successful he could work from anywhere. I'd love to see a follow-up of after he finishes school. hope you consider it.

That was a beautiful story