All Comments on 'The Sea Warrior & His Princess Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
If only...

If only sex worked like this, I would orgasm every time, unfortunately the logic behind the sex scene is not realistic and appears to be written by someone that has never experienced sex before. While the writing is legit, I would have liked to have some finesse in the transfer from unwilling captive to consensual slave.

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