All Comments on 'The Second Time Around'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Story wise, I enjoyed the breakup first part more than the finding some one new second part. It was fast, yes, but the telling felt too rushed. You made us care about him finding love again, then gave us a quickie. I want the love story and the hot sex.

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