All Comments on 'The Second Time's the Charm'

Thank you Ben for this fun little read. The main characters were interesting and the sex got and well described - what more could a Lit reader want. Nice to see you writing again! Thanks again for this fun read

Proof that a short story of short sentences can be told well. Nice job.

(shame about not speaking to Nick again, though.)

That's a five, right there. Wow. Cudos.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story of young love. It was well written and very entertaining.

Kudos, Ben!