All Comments on 'The Secret Life of Wendy Milque'

“Love loran”????? Surely you don’t mean she’s an antiquated navigation system that was replaced by GPS. “Lorn lorn?” It’s not a typo, because you did it more than once. Functionally illiterate? Perhaps.

Great little story!

Don't worry about a typo or two.

A cute idea, reasonably well-thought out with a slight backstory but way too many misused words. Spell check only gives its best guess to often end up with the wrong word properly spelled. You REALLY need a proofreader!