All Comments on 'The Secret of Fellmouth Bay Pt. 01'

a wonderful start. looking forward to the next update. hope to read it very soon.

I'm hoping that there is a little bit more romance next chapter,but this was still great!

He's quite the arrogant vamp, isn't he? No 'thank you for dragging my unappealing, sorry arse through thick beach sand and onto your clean sofa'. No, it's 'let's make you viable for plastic surgery on both sides of your neck', thank you very much. Really. Vampires these days - no etiquette.

Thanks for story. Looking forward to next chapter.

Really enjoyed this story. The best vampire story I found on the site so far. The shift in perspective between observer and experiencer, the focus on the bite as the climax rather than the sex, the ambiguity of control and acceptance, it was really good.